Preliminary plan

My plan for my preliminary plan will help me to do the actual preliminary tasks but there are some things that I could have done better now that I look back on it. For example, at the end of the video instead of having a conclusion where one of the girls got up and left or something, I just let it end during the conversation, when I actually do my preliminary task I will make sure I end it appropriately. Another thing is that I didn't show the relation between the two characters, so the audience didn't know how they knew each other.